Sixth Grade Communication Arts
by Jana Young
December 03, 2008
Sixth graders recently wrote paragraphs using the four-square writing method. Below are some of the paragraphs written by the students. You should be able to find a topic sentence, three detail sentences and a concluding sentence. Their topic was: Snacks I Like to Eat.
I love to eat snacks. One of my most favorite snacks is ice cream with strawberries and bananas. Sometimes I get home and I eat apples dipped with vanilla pudding. One of my other most favorite snacks is fruit mid with grapes, apples, nuts and whipped cream. As you can see, most of the snacks I like to eat are healthy and have to do with fruits. By Anna C.
There are many snacks I like to eat. One of my favorite snacks is cheddar cheese chips. (Shhh! Sometimes I eat the whole bag!) Another thing I eat is cookie dough on a spoon. On, and my favorite snack is gushers with their fruity filling. As you can see, I like snacks with sugar. By Owen
I like to eat snacks when I get home from school. One of my favorite snacks is rich, creamy M & Ms. Also, I like to eat delicious pb&j sandwiches with grape jelly. Another one of my favorites is crunchy Lays potato chips. As you can see, I like foods that take little or no time to prepare. By Logan
After school I like to eat snacks. One snack I like to eat is buttered popcorn. Another snack I like to eat is caramel-filled milk chocolates. Also, I like to eat chocolate chip cookies that are fresh out of the oven. As you can see, I like to eat all different kinds of snacks when I get home. By Katelyn
There are many different snacks I like to eat after school. One of my favorites is apple pie coming right out of the oven with three scoops of ice cream with whipped cream. Another is cherry-cheese cake with extra cherries and whipped cream. My dad and I’s favorite snack is double-stuffed Oreos with chocolate and milk. As you can see, the snacks I like to eat are really sweet. By Riley
There are many different types of snacks I like to eat. Cinnamon rolls are amazing when they just come out of the oven and while the cream is still melted. Chocolate pancakes with whipped cream are always a good snack. Another thing I like to eat is apples with cold caramel. As you can see, I like to eat things in a certain way. By Kameran
